本人整理 & b站/CC98等网络资源 & 新航道托福一对一学习资料，自用为主

总览

  • 不需要逻辑太严密，这不是考逻辑的GRE写作
  • 书面用语！写cannot/I am…不要写带’的缩略形式，注意标点符号后空一格，写数字要1,000这样三位一个逗号
  • 不需要太华丽生僻的辞藻(不同于雅思)，但是还是需要记一些句式和替换词汇丰富内容
  • 留出时间检查低级错误，如语法错误(三单、时态等)&拼写错误
    遣词造句与语法检查看这里
  • 字数不能太少，保险起见，综合写作字数在300+，学术讨论字数在150+

Intergrated Writing

3分钟读文章，3分钟听力，听力内容反驳文章内容，20分钟写作，建议150~225词，可以写350词左右。

  • 写的时候看的见阅读材料，看不见听力材料，记录听力内容

技巧

  • 趁着前面听力阅读(指前面的答题part)转场讲话的间隙，休息+默写模板，在可以留空的地方留空，打（）或画横线，到时候直接把写作的听力阅读的笔记填进去，节约时间也确保能正确使用模板。

  • 听力的总观点态度一定要原封不动听写出来

    • but none holds up well under examination
    • not convincing
    • it’s very easy to explain why the seemingly common-sense explanations in the reading passage are actually wrong.
    • Despite what the reading says, it’s perfectly possible that the white orca called Iceberg by Russian scientists is in fact the same individual that was spotted earlier near Alaska.
    • There are reasons to doubt each of the ratings claims advantages
    • Proposing that it is flawed

  • 节省时间，阅读部分一句话，保总观点，适当补充原因细节。

    • 一个点一般写一句阅读材料+两句听力材料
    • 读文章的时候，记下来topic和3个evidence；听力材料就是去分条反驳这3个evidence，记下来反驳的逻辑。
    • 听听力时至少为每一个点记录下两句内容，记录这两句的逻辑关系

  • 不需要写总结句!

  • 来不及则舍弃阅读，一定要把听力内容保全写下来。

  • 词数至少250+，最好300+。

  • 检查，没有语法错误拼写错误等。


模板

Vince改编-自用

  • 总观点：The article puts forth three reasons backing the view that…However, the speech argues that…(原封不动听写出来)
  • 分点
    • To begin with,the writer contends that…Oppositely,the speaker contradicts this,stating that…To be specific,…+逻辑词+…
      • 阅读观点1
      • 听力观点1+细节1.1+细节1.2
    • In addition, the reading asserts that… Conversely, the lecturer disagrees with the notion, claiming that…She(He) further explains that…+逻辑词+…
      • 阅读观点2
      • 听力观点2+细节2.1+细节2.2
    • Lastly, the passage maintains that… Nonetheless,the listening material disputes this point, proposing that…To elaborate/She(He) proves it by pointing out that…+逻辑词+…
      • 阅读观点3
      • 听力观点3+细节3.1+细节3.2

注意：
模板要灵活运用
刚开始可以完全参考，熟悉了之后可以进行同义替换，形成自己的写作风格
【同义替换】
提出/认为
express, contend, propose, maintain, believe, deem, reckon, point out, argue
并列、递进
moreover, furthermore, in addition, in the meanwhile, besides
因果
because, as, for, since, due to, owing to
therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, as a result
对比、转折
however, nevertheless, nonetheless,oppositely, on the contrary, in contrast


新航道学习

和Vince模板相似。

The reading points out that 阅读总观点. In the lecture, however, the speaker argues that 听力总观点.(这个态度一定要原封不动听写出来)
First, the reading deems that 阅读分论点1+细节概括. In contrast, the speaker in the lecture points out that 听力分论点1. To be specific, 听力细节1. Besides/However/Therefore, 听力细节2.
Second, the reading states that 阅读分论点2+细节概括 . Nevertheless, the lecture deems that 听力分论点2. He/She further explains that 听力细节1. Additionally/In contrast/Thus, 听力细节2.
Finally, the reading asserts that 阅读分论点3+细节概括 . On the other hand, the speaker maintains that 听力分论点3. He/She proves it by pointing out that 听力细节1 . In addition/Nevertheless/As a result, 听力细节2.


网络资料

  • 段落中间空行
  • 300+词，350左右为佳
    综合写作要点:
    1.阅读观点+原因:观点句要改写，原因简化点，听力反对啥，你阅读证据概括啥，不要长篇大论:听力内容尽可能用原词，内容尽可能要详细【阅读原因概括原则:听力反对的内容，一定不能少，没有反对的，想加可以加】
    2.听力笔记要点，每句话挑出来2-3个关键词
    3.在提出观点的词汇的用法上，要多样化。
    4.转折词汇的应用上，要多样
    5.如果听力实在听不出来，那么可以多概括一些阅读的内容
    6.字数 300-350词汇补充:
    词汇补充:
    观点词:Mention,refute, contend, argue point out, contradict, find out,believe, hold, disagree, consider
    转折词:Conversely, on the contrary,however, nonetheless, nevertheless
    综合写作模板

Integrated Writing

Both the passage and the lecture explore the issue about… The reading proclaims that…while in the lecture, the professor uses three specific points to contradict what the reading states.
First and foremost, the reading part holds the belief that… because..However.the lecture doubts the view by stating that.. In order to strengthen his/her ownpoint, the professor further explains that…
Moreover, the reading maintains that… because… the professor in the lectureon the contrary, points out that.. The professor defends his own point with theexample of…
Last but not least, the reading material states that…Nevertheless,the professnrargues that …


或者第一段改成：
The reading passage mentions three possible funtions/factors … ,however, the listening points out that…（all the theories presented in the reading have weakness）unconvincing/corresponding…

Independent Writing（Arguement）

45秒审题结束，15秒组织观点

  • 教授会结合话题背景，学生AB持有不同观点，你可以选择支持1位同学/先让步型承认一位同学观点的合理性，再指出其不合理的地方
  • 一般题眼在第三块提问部分，先看这个问句明确问题是什么，是对于哪个主体(个人、公司、学校、社会…)。然后往上扫一眼，**不要偏题！**右边是是两位学生的观点，正着读完即可。
  • 核心是回答教授的问题，而两位同学的观点不一定要全都带过。

剩下9分钟对观点提出主观看法和理由，至少150词，写200+词为佳

  • 背模板！
  • 实在想不出理由，客观理由+主观经历1.Intergrated Writing
  • 3分钟读文章，3分钟听力，听力内容反驳文章内容，20分钟写作，建议150~225词，可以写350词左右。
  • 写的时候看的见阅读材料，看不见听力材料，记录听力内容
  • 对于非常开放的问题，全部自己讲，不要和学生观点重复；对于二选一的问题，可以用just as Kelly mentioned之类的话去和学生互动。

题型:

  • Evaluation
    • good or bad->What do you think
  • Comparison
    • A or B 做出选择
  • Argument
    • yes or no
  • Solution
    • what to do
1
  • 主题
    • Education
    • Tech & Info
    • Social issues
    • Life issues
    • Environment
    • Business & Work

模板

Vince

Structure 1:
Point & Elaboration + Further Elaboration + Example + Concession

  • 一般建议这个

Structure 2:
Point & Elaboration + Further Elaboration + Second Point & Elaboration + Further Elaboration

  • 没有明确二选一且也不是纯开放，或者驳论不出来用这个

Structure 3:
Point & Elaboration + Further Elaboration + Full Concession

  • 类似struct1

Structure 4:
Point & Elaboration + Further Elaboration + Sublimation

  • 这个用于开放式的，写一个观点之后->To avoid that issue/address the probelm/realize this idea…+做法+例子(eg/vs)

eg: In your posts, I want you to discuss the following question: What do you believe is the biggest mistake that people make when buying tech products? Explain what this mistake is.


  • Point
    • 根据四种题型Evaluation、Comparison、Argument、Solution组织观点语言
    • From my perspective, xx (may not)significantly contributes to…, as…
    • adopting a multi-pronged approach…
    • It is universally acknowledged that…
    • I believe that … // I firmly hold the idea that … // In my opinion, … // As far as I am concerned, … // It is obvious that …
    • the best way to do sth …/xx siginificantly benefits the scoiety…
    • xx is the foundation of xx/the basic aim of xx is to do sth/xx hinges on xx/contribute greatly
    • 正述观点后置论据
      • Practical experience will greatly promote / hinder students’ academic development as they can deepen their understanding in their field of study.
      • The overuse of technology will have a positive / negative impact on our personal development since it will hinder our independent thinking.
      • We shall definitely prioritize economic development over environmental protection due to the fact that a stable economy is the very foundation of social, scientific, and industrial development.
    • 前置论据后述观点
      • The fact that discussion involves active exchange of ideas between participants indicates that such style of learning drives us to strengthen our communication skills.
  • Elaboration
    • To illustrate, …
    • To be more specific, during a discussion, students not only have to come up with their own thoughts but also consider those from others, which stimulates an active way of thinking.
    • To elaborate, practical experience will help students witness the true nature of a job instead of developing some random imagination based on their limited experience, developing a real passion in their field of study.
    • In other words, it is only in a prosperous, stable, and developed society that we can allocate extra resources to implement the protection of the environment.
    • More specifically, instead of thinking and analyzing a problem, people might rely on technology to search for quick answers to every question they have in life and study.
  • Example
    • Substantiation 把上述观点展开讲，具象化一个广为接受的事实1
    • Story Telling 小例子，写的长且详细一些，但不要出错1
  • Concession-Refutation
    • (让步)Still,… some may argue that/voice arises that…
    • (依旧坚持自己的观点) However… 1

三篇范文： 1
1
1
让步段落语句

Still, voices arise that … . Nonetheless,…

  • It is true that a balanced appraoch is ideal, yet… should come(s) first. Only…
  • It is … that can / Only … can fundamentally solve the problem
  • override/outweigh
  • serve as a perfect substitute/compensation that…
  • allow for doing sth
  • … hinge on …
  • A is not always/often concomitant with B
  • However, even the best resources are ineffective without dedicated teachers to guide students in using them.
  • the cardinal rule of sth is to…
  • sth would (not) pale in comparison

李文勍模板

  • 10秒内确定提纲是以下两种的哪一种
直接型

学术写作–题目思路+框架(直给型，直接认可以一位同学的观点)
1.表达自己支持哪一位同学的观点:From my point of view, l tend to support WHO’s opinion that…
2.提出自己补充的观点:Apart from+该同学的理由, another reasonlwant toadd is that+提出自己的新理由In addition,in my view
3.解释论证自己的观点:In other words,…/Especcially these days
4.举例论证支持自己的观点:For instance/take somebody as an examplefor example
5.总结:All in all/Therefore/in conclusion
范文:
From my perspective, I tend to support Penny’s opinion children should not be allowed to watch a lot of videos online.
Apart from her reasons. another reason I want to add is that children are usually under 12 years old and at this stage, they usually cannot tell right from wrong. In this case, giving children the permit to watch videos online for entertainment may expose them to something that may impact their lives negatively as in the information era, everyone can be the author of online materials. For instance,somebody may post a video of violence, like beating people or violent games, to be eye-catching. Children who watch that video may feel excited by that video and may even want to imitate the behaviors in the video instead of turning it off in disgust.
To sum up, watching videos is not a good way to entertain for children.

让步型

学术写作–题目思路+框架(让步型，先同意他说说法是有道理的，然后指出他考虑得不足的地方)
1.让步认可一位同学的观点:WHO present a compelling argument that
2.让步认可的理由:Admittedly,WHO is right when
3.转折提出自己的观点:Nevertheless,considering(这位同学没有考虑到的点),
am inclined to….
4.给予新的支持理由:In my view,…
5.解释陈述:In other words,….
6.例证细节:For example,….
7.总结观点:Therefore.
Andrew presents a compelling/convincing/persuasiove argument in favor of endorsing student sports activities. Admittedly,sports participation is a superb means to promote students’ physical health. Nevertheless, considering the university’s responsibilities in fostering academic preeminence, I am inclined toprioritize the construction of a new library.
In my view, a new library can enhance teaching and scholarly communication. A well-equipped library, serving as a platform for academic exchange and cooperation, not only provides access to print books but also offers high-speed Internet connectivity and databases for interdisciplinary collaborations. For example,as collaborative programs across disciplines continue to increase, both faculty and students in our Architecture Department require establishing a new library that enhances networks across departments, which will profoundly enrich the interdisciplinary collaboration database.
Therefore, I firmly believe that giving priority to constructing a new library through integrating multidisciplinary materials will substantially improve scholarly communication and strengthen our research capabilities.


网络资料总结

只需要一段，不需要换行

  • 180词左右佳，至少150词
  • 记住托福是语言考试，不像GRE是逻辑考试那么重视立意
  • 检查语法错误！！！
    • I firmly hold the idea that…,for/since…
      -To illustrate,…
      -Correspondingly/In addition/As a result/On the other hand/…
      -To elaborate,…
    • Still,vioce arises that…Ironically,…
      -summary.

①观点阐述
Although(踩另一个观点), I perfer(让你二选一，写是谁的观点)/agree(问你A/D)…（改写，提到原文的人名有互动，实在都不同意就Although有道理但both xx and xx ‘s ideas are unconvincing）
Although it seems reasonable that/it seems true that/it seems/appears to be
as xx asserts, I prefer xx’s viewpoint that
When it comes to xxx, I share xx’s view that…
Apart from her reasons, another reason I want to add is that…

  • 也可以在后面自己提观点的时候带一下这两个的观点
    I understand/acknowledge/recognize Andrew’s concern over/point that …, but I believe he misses another critical point that …
    First and foremost/To begin with, just as Kelly has said, …, for …
    On the other hand, it is true that … like Andrew said, but …

② 用社会时代背景引入
We are in a fast world racing against the clock.、a world obsessed with speed.
SConcerning xx,…(从背景原因回应一下讨论问题)
the booming growth of economy/population
The swift evolution of technology/The exponential growth of technology
In the era of exponential technological growth, computers have been becoming increasingly essential in our daily life, offering several/certaun advantages, but also posing numerous challenges.
As the world rapidly changes in a fast-paced manner…

With the rapid growing of …, there are … However, when it comes to …, numerous customers/residents believe that …

In today’s interconnected and fast-paced world, … has become a crucial aspect of our daily lives, influencing various decisions and behaviors.

In today’s dynamic business environment, effective leadership is essential for guiding companies to success.

③ 原因1
The reason is that it is…/the basement. basic… of xxx is that(底层出发拆解关键词) /young kids are…(直接特征解释)
进一步阐释，使用逻辑关系which means…/result in
Only when they are kept away from the devices can these negative effects be prevented.
which enables them to enhance their skills, improve their projects/products, and ultimately excel.
While entertainment activities like concerts can be enjoyable, they should not overshadow the primary mission of education
This reallocation can ensure that the most vulnerable segments of society receive necessary support, such as better educational opportunities and improved access to healthcare services.
Student/bank loans may lead us into the abyss of debt, so we have to bear the tuition fees ourselves

④ 举例子，一定要有例子/可插入名人名言
For instance/example/ be it引用句子/例子 个人例子I即可 改成one也可以
According to the Common Sense Media

⑤ 原因2+简略的解释、有时间就类比原因1/A better way is to…/让步转折
换个角度，个人到社会，对小孩对家长，对自己对公司，对现在对未来+良性循环

  • In addition，
    from xx’s perspective/at the level of society…
    It is conducive to creating an atmosphere of fairness and justice in the whole society
  • On the contrary,
  • Moreover, xx can act as a catalyst
  • As is known to all that…
    Only then can they enter the virtue circle of (work-life-balance)
    Only then can we strike a balance between…
    This will natrually/further alleviate the pressure weighing on our society at the status quo, allowing people to choose a healthier and happier lifestyle/enrich their life/live their life to the fullest.

Still, some voices arise that … Nevertheless, …

⑥ 总结点题（可略）
Therefore, I firmly believe that…


立意论证

李文勍12种立意

【注意】考试时间有限，无需论述完美；牢记万能理由，快速拓展例证！

方便 效率 经济 耐久 安全 环保 交流 经验 乐趣 成就 情感 健康

新航道学习

分析思路：

  • 自己-他人(多方对象)-社会

  • 个人关注的：身心健康，钱，快乐与兴趣,经验与成就

  • 他人：家人、朋友、邻居、同学同事

  • 社会关注的：政治经济生态文明(人口、军事、福利等等)

  • 个人类

    • 交友
      • 结交更多朋友
      • 与朋友更多话题更进一步
      • 社交能力：better communication and interperson skills
    • 工作
      • 求职
      • 升职加薪
    • 兴趣
      • 放松，从繁重的学习工作中解脱
      • 培养品格
      • 交友，社区社群社会和谐，文化风气等 foster a sense of community/belonging in our class/neighborhood/society
    • 家人
    • 知识
      • 未来的竞争力与机会
      • 求知本身的乐趣
    • 健康
      • 放松，从繁重的学习工作中解脱
      • 保障人身安全

  • 集体类

    • 经济
    • 教育
    • 环境
    • 科技
    • 文化
    • financially-disadvantaged 穷困群体
    • the physically-challenged 残障群体

论证方法：

  • 对比

    • 今夕对比
    • 有无对比
    • 面向对象不同
    • 所处领域不同

  • 举例

    • 编个人例子(弱，但可应急，不要用于政府类)
    • 抽象事例——领域，群体，行业，国家
      • 多写抽象事例——变成并列事例(改变句式)
    • 并列事例(学生-小学生+中学生+大学生)
    • 名人事例，自行积累

语料

结合了Vince的框架与新航道的例文。

Education

Micro - Students’ Growth & Education

  • Children’s growth
    • Enlightenment
    • development of interests
  • Students’ education
    • Academic development
    • Personal development
    • Social communication
    • Physical and mental health
    • Moral development
  • University, life & education
    • Career development
    • Life & work skills

Macro - Social Impact

  • Social Economy
  • Social equality & stability
  • Tech development
  • Cultural development

educate or research

I am of the opinion that professors should focus on research. From the perspective of society at large, professors’ commitment to scholarship is crucial to progress in science and technology. Research, after all, is meant to probe into the unknown and unravel mysteries. Such exploration requires a high standard of professional knowledge as well as creativity on the part of researchers. Only with such skills can science break new ground. Accordingly, there is no doubt that it is the intellectual elite, rather than ordinary people, that are the driving force of technological advances. If professors were forced to give up their projects, there would be no one with the required ability to carry out scientific inquiry. The result would be a dearth of groundbreaking discoveries and inventions with the potential to reshape our lives. Compared with scientific exploration, educating students is less demanding in the sense that a teacher needs only to impart established knowledge found in textbooks through the vehicle of lectures. That is why, in order to promote the continued development of science and technology, it is more appropriate for professors to concentrate their efforts on research, and not to lecture. (194 words)

  • meet her teacher’s stringent expectations
  • general and advanced class on Grade 1 of senior high school 尖子班与普通班
  • mental state 心理状态
  • it is essential to prioritize a healthy state of mind over the marginal progress that journals may provide.
  • boost/bolster confidence
  • comply with遵从 one’s wishes
  • make complimentary remarks to students


Tech & Info

  • as technology advances by leaps and bounds
  • Needless to say, in this ever-accelerating society
科技利弊

Because we live in an information era,people have learned to overcame the negative impacts of the information overload.

资源利用
  • Desalination(海水淡化) technology which converts sea water into fresh water is effective to alleviate the problem of water scarcity.
  • The development of water-saving agriculture has great potential,which is beneficial to the optimal allocation(资源优化配置) of water and soil resources.
  • supply fall short of demand
  • High cost-effectiveness高性价比的
新能源车

可持续发展 sustainable development
尾号限行 traffic restrictions based on the last digit of license plate numbers
摇号 license-plate lottery
潮汐车道 reversible lanes
可再生能源 renewable energy
碳足迹 carbon footprint
机动车排放标准 automobile emission standards

社交媒体

Social Media


Social issues

Macro - Social Impact

  • Social Economy
  • Social equality & stability
  • Tech development
  • Cultural development
经济民生
  • amenities设施 local~ like hospitals/kindergartens…
  • …,ultimately, lead to a more equitable society
  • remove financial barriers for those financially-disadvantaged
艺术娱乐
  • Numerous studies show that museums and galleries can enrich our spiritual lives.
传统文化
  • Nowadays, it is widely acknowledged that the prerequisite(前提) of substainable development(可持续发展) is to conserve traditional cultural heritage.
跨文化交流
  • The point is that cross-cultural communication should not sacrifice cutrual individuality.
  • The fact that endangered languages gradually disappear as a result of technological advancement and cultrual integration has raised a heated discussion.
先锋艺术

avant-garde 先锋艺术


Life issues

社交

结交新朋友（enlarge one’s social circle）
和朋友有更多共同话题（have more common topics with friends）
与同事和谐相处（establish a close rapport with colleagues）
跟家人保持亲密的关系（maintain intimate relationships with families）
倾诉（confide one’s problems to ones friends）
志同道合的朋友（congenial companions）

兴趣

放松（escape from daily grind / hustle and bustle / regain vigorous mentality）
保障人身安全（ensure personal safety）

学习

开阔眼界（broaden one’s horizon）
丰富人生阅历（enrich / accumulate life experiences）
培养独立性、责任感（cultivate independence / a sense of responsibility）
艰难的任务 arduous tasks
学习/吸收知识 assimilate knowledge
赶ddl meet the deadlines

健康
  • Long-term consumption of high-calorie food causes children to gain weight and to develop health problems.
  • The organic produce made in this way is popular with most vegetarians.
  • 吸收营养 absorb/assimilate nutrients
  • 调味品 condiment

Environment

城市化
  • Private companies that discharge toxic chemicals into the air should pay for the treatment of air contamination.
  • Fast-paced modern life increases the pressure in big cities,making people vulnerable to stress-related illness.
  • 当地居民身份：localresidency
  • 获得更多商业用地：yieldmorecommercial land
  • 房地产投机：real estate speculation
  • many cities actually face a situation of unmatchable resources, which refers to the imbalance between the large populations and the limited housing space.
  • CBD：Central Business District
  • plays a pivotal role in the prosperity and progressof the society.
生态文明

  • A growing number of people who gradually realize the seriousness of global warming begin to take actions to ameliorate this situation.

  • enforcing laws to prohibit …

  • 丰富的生物多样性：great biodiversity

  • enforcing laws to prohibit…

  • multi-pronged approach that includes…


Business & Work

Minor - Individuals

  • Customer
  • Corporation
  • Business
  • Industry

Macro - Social Impact

  • Social Economy
  • Social equality & stability
  • Tech development
  • Cultural development
找工作

求职机会（have plenty of job opportunities）
升职加薪（receive promotion / career advancement）
市场竞争激烈(booming growth of population/keen/fierce competition is job/labour market)
customer service 客服
considerable experience

效率

节省时间精力（save time and effort）
方便（enjoy convenience）

多管齐下的方法：a multi-pronged approach
改变现状：changethestatusquo

rush into doing sth without further consideration

电子钱包

Pros

  • Convenience
  • Easier to do business
  • Safety
  • Health 避免接触
    Cons
  • Bad habits
  • Negative social trend
  • Inconvenience for some Fraud and Scams
跟团vs自由行

I would not choose to join a group when planning a trip, as visitors will face the possibility of making unwanted purchases during the trip. More specifically, it is one of the underlying rules of the tourism industry that guides receive commission收取回扣 from certain tourist sites, restaurants and shops. Thus, driven by personal profit, some tour guides may lead the group to these places and try their best to encourage spending. Souvenirs are always more expensive and meals are overpriced. Consequently, travelers often suffer additional financial losses. A real-life experience that provides a vivid example is this: I once joined a guided tour to Hainan, a popular scenic spot that boasts attractive seashores and delicious seafood. During the tour, our guide took us to a shop selling marine products and succeeded in persuading several tourists to buy goods there. I later found out that similar items were much cheaper at other stores. Similar examples abound in our daily lives, suggesting that it may not be a good idea to participate in a staged有组织的 tour. (174words)

快递

deliveryman=courier=expressman
e-commerce=web stores=online shops